Things to consider:
What has happened?
Where is this situation set?
Who are the people?
What are their jobs?
Use good adjectives so that your reader can picture the scene
Kimball's Composers
Wright Students Write Right!
Things to consider:
What has happened?
Where is this situation set?
Who are the people?
What are their jobs?
Use good adjectives so that your reader can picture the scene
The crash was an outburst of color. Glass from the lightbulb scattered the damp cement as mixed beads rolled over the mess. Julia had accidentally dropped her project onto the hard stained platform as she tripped over a slanted step. When she vigorously began to rearrange the pieces into place outside of her science building, two men in white suits appeared from the pile. They said to have come as advisors from another dimension for clumsy mortals in difficult situations. Volunteering to help, relieved Julia of her stress and exchanged her frown for a smile. A kind act brought hope. (Andra)